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Gemma Hello:) How are you? Today I'm not going to talk about me, because I know from last year.

I'll talk about my summer holidays. I spent a happy holiday.

In June and July was in Catalonia, but in August I went to Morocco.

In July, I sometimes went with my friends to the beach, sometimes we went out at night and always had great moments, and lots of fun. I have spent July with my best friends.

In August I went with my family in Morocco. It was a very interesting and memorable trip.

I was with my family after two years without seeing them. I went with my cousins to the beach, I met many people and children who were very nice people, when I return I will be with them for too long because I've been a better time with them, and I wanted to return, but no problem, Christmas holidays I hope return with them

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We read adrian Mole and we watched the film Thirteen. The main themes are very similar, which can be of any teen (drugs, feel beautiful, have a partner, sex, friends influence ...). In Tarcy’s case these problems are clearer, Tracy is a girl who starts to see the world from another perspective when she starts to join and be Evie’s friend,

she starts to take drugs and alcohol, but this doesn't ocur to adrian, because the parents of adrian parents are alcoholic and that makes him to not be interested in drugs.

A similarity between the two is the issue of beauty. Adrian was always worried about his image, and he was capable to do everything possible to make his spots disappear. For Tracy it is the same, she always worries about the clothes she should wear, make up...

The two main characters had problems with their parents, who were divorced, and that affected Adrian. In his case, her mother left home and scaped with another man, and he’s living with his father. In Tracy’s case, the one who left home was her father.

The two characters suffer an economic crisis, Adrian more than Tracy but even that, both are suffering and that makes to them have problems with their parents.

A problem that only Adrian suffer is the violence by a boy from school. Tarcy was not sufferting that, but even it, her schoolmates wers laughting at her.

Adrian was in love with a girl who starts dating hs best friend, and that makes him feel really bad. But Tarcy was not having the same problem, causes he didn’t fall in love with anyone. At the end of the movie, Evie (tarcy’s friend) say that all the fault of that problems are because of Tracy, and that’s why causes he was trying to be innocent.

But Adrian’s friend don’t make the same cause he doesn’t betray his friend.

At least, both (Tracy and Adrian) noticed that they were making all things wrong and they return to their normal lives, seeing things from a positive perspective and trying to solve their problems.

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Once upon a time there was an ugly girl (Denisse) who was 21 years old. She was searching for a job, but no one want her because she was extremely ugly and her job was create “beauty products”. One day, she comes to another beauty agency and she fall in love at first sigh with the boss of the company. Time passed and the girl feels deeply depressive. No one call her to work on their companys… So another day, while she was walking to the park, she collided with a boy. He quickly helped her to up off the groung, and when she looks at his face noticed that who was him. The Boss of the latest company!!! They start to talk and they went to sit in a bank, and he introduced hisself. His name is John.
Days passed and she was meeting him every day at the park, but he didn’t know that she was going there only to meet him. So, one day he was with another girl. A really beauty girl. Is it easy to notice that that girl was in love with him too. When he saw Denisse he quickly introduce the beauty girl. Her name was Rose.
Rose was a bad girl, and she tried to make fun about Denisse.
The next day, John phoned Denisse to accept her at the company, and Denisse was really happy! She found a job and at the same time, John is her Boss!!!
But things were no that easy, cause Rose is working there too. She’s the secretary of John.
Little by little, Rose was trying always to get fun of Denisse, and to get Denisse far from John, but she didn’t achieve nothing.

One day, Rose, confessed their feelings to John, but he rejected her saying:

- I’m in love with another girl. A pure girl.

That girl was Denisse, and John went quickly to confess his feeling to her, cause she was listenig behind the door when Rose confessed it, and she runs away quickly.

John found Denisse, and confess his feeling, and she said that she loves him too.

From that day on, they lived happy till the end of their lives.

The end
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I couldn't choose the best writing because I think that anyone of the them is the best, they all have many errors and very low note and I prefer put them and try that the next term to have a very well done, that it would be the best writing.

I Hope you like the story :)That's all,seee yoooou<3